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STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION
"Loud as a Whisper
#40272-132
Written by
Jackie Zambrano
Directed by
Larry Shaw
THE WRITING CREDITS MAY NOT BE FINAL AND SHOULD NOT BE USED
FOR PUBLICITY OR ADVERTISING PURPOSES WITHOUT FIRST CHECKING
WITH THE TELEVISION LEGAL DEPARTMENT.
Copyright 1988 Paramount Pictures Corporation. All Rights
Reserved. This script is not for publication or
reproduction. No one is authorized to dispose of same. If
lost or destroyed, please notify the Script Department.
FINAL DRAFT
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - draft 11/4/88 CAST
STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION
"Loud as a Whisper"
CAST
PICARD RIVA
RIKER 1ST LEADER/WARRIOR
TROI SCHOLAR/ARTIST
WORF WARRIOR/ADONIS/PERSON
DATA CULTURED WOMAN
GEORDI 2ND LEADER/WARRIOR
PULASKI
WESLEY
TRANSPORTER CHIEF
Non-Speaking Non-Speaking
CREWMEMBERS BOY
SOLDIERS/COMBATANTS
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - DRAFT 11/10/88 - SETS
STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION
"Loud as a Whisper"
SETS
INTERIORS EXTERIORS
USS ENTERPRISE USS ENTERPRISE
MAIN BRIDGE
CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM PLANET RAMATIS 3
TURBOLIFT
TRANSPORTER ROOM PLANET SOLAIS 5
GUEST QUARTERS MOUNTAIN TOP
OBSERVATION LOUNGE
SICKBAY
MAIN ENGINEERING
CORRIDOR
PLANET RAMATIS
ANTEROOM
LARGER ROOM
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - PRONUNCIATION GUIDE
STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION
"Loud as a Whisper"
PRONUNCIATION GUIDE
RIVA REE-va
SOLAIS So-LAY-is
RAMATIS RAH-mah-tis
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - TEASER 1.
STAR TREK: THE NEXT GENERATION
"Loud as a Whisper"
TEASER
FADE IN:
1 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
The ship glides through space, planets and stars.
PICARD (V.O.)
Captain's log, Stardate 42411.2.
The Enterprise has been
unexpectedly diverted to the
Ramatis star system. The two
sides of a bitter little planetary
conflict have petitioned Starfleet
to transport to their world a
mediator they have mutually
selected. Our orders are
transportation only -- no
interference, no responsibilities.
It is a mission much to my
liking.
2 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
RIKER has the Command position. WESLEY has the Conn,
DATA is at Ops, n.d. CREWMEMBER at Tactical. The other
positions are occupied by n.d. crewmembers.
RIKER
Reduce to half impulse.
WESLEY
Reducing velocity to one-half
impulse.
Riker walks to the captain's Ready Room door.
The CHIME signals Riker's presence. From inside,
CAPTAIN PICARD calls out.
PICARD (O.S.)
Come.
The door opens.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - TEASER 2.
3 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM (OPTICAL)
Riker enters. Spread across and above Picard's desk is
a complicated arrangement of three-dimensional shapes -- some
on the surface, others seemingly suspended in
air.
PICARD
Ah, Number One. Look at this.
Ever since we left the Lima-Sierra
system, I have been puzzling over
how the third planet could
maintain such an orbit, when it
is theoretically impossible, but
consider this.
Riker moves closer, whereupon Picard activates the
display. The shapes GO INTO MOTION. They then STOP.
RIKER
There's no degeneration?
PICARD
Exactly!
RIKER
Why?
PICARD
I haven't got that worked out.
RIKER
Perhaps this facsimile lacks mass.
PICARD
Yes, somewhat, but if this is an
accurate representation -- would
it not explain what happened in
that system?
Riker moves closer.
RIKER
(as he studies the
display)
Perhaps.
Picard comes back to business.
PICARD
Well, not a matter of great moment -- just
a knot I had to untie.
Now... What was it you wanted to
see me about?
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - TEASER 3.
3 CONTINUED:
RIKER
Captain, we have arrived at
Ramatis Three.
Picard gets to his feet as he speaks:
PICARD
Ah -- well -- time to leave.
4 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
entering orbit near the silver and blue planet of
Ramatis Three.
5 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
as before. Picard and Riker come onto the bridge.
RIKER
Standard orbit, Mister Crusher.
WESLEY
Standard orbit.
Together they head for the turbolift.
RIKER
Data, you have the bridge.
Data leaves Ops and is immediately replaced by an n.d.
FEMALE CREWMEMBER. He takes the Command position.
6 ANOTHER ANGLE
as Riker and Picard enter the turbolift, the doors
close.
7 INT. TURBOLIFT
RIKER
I am still uncomfortable about
your leading this away team.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - TEASER 4.
7 CONTINUED:
PICARD
This is not an away team in the
strictest sense. I consider this
more of a ceremonial function.
For me not to go, could be
construed a lack of respect, or
that I do not regard the mission
as significant. Transporter Room
Five.
The turbolift heads for Deck Seventeen.
RIKER
Considering the importance of this
mission and the lives which are
at stake... I don't want to do
anything which would have a
negative affect on this
negotiation, however...
PICARD
I appreciate your concern, Number
One, but, I'm sure it will go
quite smoothly.
RIKER
We have come a great distance for
this mediator.
PICARD
They asked for the best and that
person, from all reports, is Riva.
The turbolift arrives. Riker and Picard step off.
7A INT. CORRIDOR
as they walk along.
RIKER
I've never heard of him.
PICARD
I'm not surprised, he hasn't
mediated for several decades.
RIKER
That's a long time to be out of
the saddle. Let's hope he's not
rusty.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - TEASER 5.
7A CONTINUED:
PICARD
Yes, for all our sakes... let's
hope Riva is at the top of his
game.
They turn and enter the Transporter Room.
8 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL)
TROI and WORF are waiting. They step onto the
platform.
TRANSPORTER CHIEF
Coordinates have been input.
PICARD
Very good, Lieutenant. Worry not,
Number One -- this will be a simple
ceremonial greeting, and right
back to the Enterprise.
RIKER
I'm sure.
PICARD
Energize.
And the away team -- with Picard as their leader -- VANISHES.
9 INT. RAMATIS - ANTEROOM (OPTICAL)
as the away team STACKS UP.
10 ANOTHER ANGLE - INT. RAMATIS - ANTEROOM
A handsome BOY greets the away team, and motions for
them to follow him.
11 ANOTHER ANGLE
as they reach a vestibule which leads to a larger room.
The boy leads them toward a larger room.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - TEASER 6.
12 INT. LARGER ROOM
They enter. There is no one in the room. At the far
end is a raised dais. The design of the room is
geometric -- the decorations eclectic. As the away team
looks around, they realize their young guide has
disappeared and they are all alone:
Off their reactions:
FADE OUT.
END OF TEASER
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT ONE 7.
ACT ONE
FADE IN:
13 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
in orbit around the planet Ramatis.
14 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
Riker once again has the Command position.
RIKER
Captain, this is the Enterprise.
PICARD'S COM VOICE
We have arrived safely, Number
One, and for the most part, we've
been ignored... ah...
15
thru OMITTED
16
17 INT. RAMATIS - LARGER ROOM
The away team in the larger room.
PICARD
... some of the local citizenry
are beginning to assemble. I'll
keep you informed.
RIKER'S COM VOICE
I would appreciate it.
18 ANOTHER ANGLE - LARGER ROOM
Slowly, without any apparent signal, HUMANOIDS begin to
casually assemble. They enter the room from portals,
scattered along the walls, talking quietly among
themselves in an unrecognizable, and mostly unheard,
language.
19 ANOTHER ANGLE
There are three of them... each a distinctive
personality and physical archetype -- the
SCHOLAR/ARTIST, the WARRIOR/ADONIS, a CULTURED WOMAN.
These "types" show no emotion, and if they are aware of
the away team, they do not acknowledge them.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT ONE 8.
20 ANOTHER ANGLE
a MAN enters from behind the away team. By his dress,
his carriage and his presence he is someone in
authority. This is RIVA -- he appears to be around
thirty earth years, pleasant looking, with an open
friendly countenance.
21 PICARD AND TROI
as Riva passes them. He pauses, studying first Picard -- his
appraisal is open, his gaze penetrating. Because
of his vast experience in different and unusual
situations, Picard has the wisdom to wait for Riva to
make the first move. Riva then turns his attention
on Worf, then to Troi, then leaves her with a warm
flirtatious smile.
TROI
(she responds with a
smile, and a nod)
Riva.
22 ANOTHER ANGLE - ROOM
Riva walks onto the dais, those he passes offer a
greeting.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
eeennniYOO.
It is obviously a term of respect as well as a
greeting. Riva responds with a slight wave of his
hand.
TROI
He is a well-liked leader. Their
affection is genuine, as is his.
PICARD
Well, if they respect him on
Solais, as much as they do here -- we
could be looking forward to
a successful mission.
23 ANOTHER ANGLE
Riva takes his place on the dais, the CHORUS gathers in
front of him. Riva pauses, comfortable -- relaxed -- very
pleasant. His expression is bemused -- as though
he is expecting good news.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT ONE 9.
23 CONTINUED:
PICARD
Counselor?
TROI
I've never seen anything like this
before and I'm a little uncertain
about how to proceed.
(smiles)
There is a wonderful feeling of
well being, emanating from here.
The man on the dais, makes a very slight motion --
(through all this the Chorus never turns to face Riva.
Their method of communication we do not understand and
will never understand. It is part of their long
history.)
WOMAN
Please -- come closer.
The away team takes a couple of steps closer.
WOMAN
(continuing)
Before I start, is there anything
you need? Refreshments, food.
PICARD
No. But thank you for asking.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
Then --
(with a gesture to
Picard)
Proceed.
Picard hesitates - then...
PICARD
Greetings from the United
Federation of Planets. I am
Captain Jean-Luc Picard, of the
USS Enterprise. This is Counselor
Troi, and Lieutenant Worf.
Riva remains impassive. He again studies the away
team. Then he makes a slight MOVE with HIS HANDS. And
the Chorus SPEAKS.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
GREETINGS!
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT ONE 10.
23 CONTINUED: (2)
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
Welcome to Ramatis.
WOMAN
I have been expecting you.
The away team is surprised.
The Warrior/Adonis member of the Chorus, takes a step
closer to Troi, and gives her a blinding smile.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
You're empathic.
TROI
Yes.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
Then, although you already know
my feelings toward you, allow
me to put them into words. I
am looking forward to this
journey, now more than ever,
because it gives me the chance
to spend time in your company.
Warrior/Adonis smiles, then all expression leaves his
face.
TROI
(she speaks to Riva,
not Warrior/Adonis)
I am flattered. And I too, look
forward to learning more about
you.
24 PICARD
He looks the Chorus over, then turns to Troi for
advice.
TROI
(quietly to Picard)
There's a very different kind of
communication here, Captain.
PICARD
Yes, so I see. I think there are
facets to Riva about which we were
not informed.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT ONE 11.
24 CONTINUED:
WOMAN
Precisely. It is a process which
has developed over the centuries
and one I find quite harmonious.
PICARD
So Riva the famous mediator is... ?
WARRIOR/ADONIS
Deaf.
(with great conviction)
Born, and hope to die.
PICARD
(indicating Chorus)
And you all speak for Riva?
CHORUS
Yes.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
I not only convey his words, but
his emotional intent as well.
TROI
The members of the Chorus, serve
as "translators," and each
represents the archetypes of man's
personality.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
I am the scholar. I represent
the intellect. I speak in
matters of judgment -- philosophy -- logic.
Also, I am -- the dreamer.
The part which longs to see the
beauty beyond the truth which is
always the first duty of art.
I am the poet...
Riva makes a slight movement and the Scholar/Artist --
shuts up and steps back.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT ONE 12.
24 CONTINUED: (2)
WARRIOR/ADONIS
Artists tend to ramble, they live
too much in the future, they
neglect the moment. I am Riva's
libido. I am his passion. I am
the anarchy of lust. The romantic -- the
(with a little
self-deprecating nod
to Troi)
... lover. Also, I am as he.
(indicates Worf)
The definition of Riva's honor...
the perfect line which never
wavers.
PICARD
(to the Woman)
And you...
WOMAN
I represent that part of Riva
which binds all the others
together. I am harmony -- wisdom -- balance.
PICARD
(to the Woman)
Remarkable. How did this...
Riva flashes anger.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
Speak to me!
The away team is surprised by the outburst. Worf
instinctively steps forward.
PICARD
What?!
Again Riva gestures aggressively.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
Speak directly to me!
TROI
(so Riva cannot read
her lips)
He's prodding you to get a
reaction.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT ONE 13.
24 CONTINUED: (3)
PICARD
(to Riva)
The uniqueness of this
presentation provoked my
inadvertent breach in protocol.
No insult was intended.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
Then... none is perceived.
PICARD
I was curious about how this
unique form of communication came
about.
WOMAN
The gene for hearing is not
present in our planet's ruling
line.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
Not that unusual, indeed it is
similar to the English Tudor
monarchs of your planet Earth,
all who had hemophilia. Or the
leaders of Fendaus Five, who were
without limbs.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
Throughout time, many of the
galaxy's greatest contributors
have been similarly "special."
PICARD
(to Riva)
Your ability to read lips -- is
very impressive.
WOMAN
Thank you.
PICARD
Your "translators" do not see you,
yet they are able to accurately
convey your thoughts.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT ONE 14.
24 CONTINUED: (4)
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
My Chorus is so attuned -- they
can "hear" my hands and translate
to you. It is a relationship
which has developed over centuries -- their
ancestors provided the
same service to my ancestors.
TROI
Your way of communication is most
distinctive, Riva.
The Warrior/Adonis shifts his place on the steps,
closer to her.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
It takes a fine mind to appreciate
that, Counselor Troi.
TROI
(indicates
Warrior/Adonis)
This part of you does not seem
to speak very often.
Riva's eyes dance in flirtation.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
Only when the spirit moves me.
His gaze is intense, very male. Troi lowers her eyes.
PICARD
Riva -- if you are ready -- the
situation at Solais Five is very
critical. We should not delay.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
I will prepare for departure
immediately.
PICARD
Are you all -- I mean -- Riva, did
you plan to take these people with
you?
WARRIOR/ADONIS
(challenging)
Is that a problem?
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT ONE 15.
24 CONTINUED: (5)
PICARD
No, it's just that we didn't know
you would all be coming.
Riva descends the steps, toward Troi.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
(to Troi)
How long will my journey to
Solais take?
TROI
More than two of your days.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
(Riva comes up and
beside them)
Then, until duty calls, this will
indeed be a pleasant trip.
25 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL)
The away team, now including Riva and his Chorus, move
slightly to the side. Worf touches his communicator.
WORF
With your permission, Captain.
PICARD
Make it so.
WORF
Enterprise, this is the away team,
seven to beam up.
Riva, the Chorus, and the away team BEAM UP to the
Enterprise.
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT ONE
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 16.
ACT TWO
FADE IN:
26 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
in orbit around Ramatis.
27 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
Riker has the Command Chair, Data is at Ops, Wesley
has the Conn. PULASKI and GEORDI are also on the
bridge. Riker is anxious to get underway, and relieved
when he hears:
TRANSPORTER CHIEF'S COM VOICE
The away team, plus four, is on
board.
RIKER
Acknowledged. Ensign, set your
course for Solais Five.
Wesley inputs the coordinates.
WESLEY
Course is set.
RIKER
Velocity -- warp eight.
WESLEY
Warp eight -- aye.
RIKER
Engage, Mister Crusher.
WESLEY
Yes, sir.
28 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
stretches into warp.
29 ANOTHER ANGLE - MAIN BRIDGE
The turbolift opens, Picard leads the others onto the
bridge. Worf goes immediately to his position. Riker
stands, ready to greet his guest.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 17.
30 ANGLE ON THE AWAY TEAM AND RIVA
They enter, cross to Riker. Picard begins the
introductions.
PICARD
Riva, may I present--
RIKER
(indicating the Chorus)
What's this?
PICARD
These three -- speak for Riva.
Riker also reacts with surprise.
RIKER
You mean, the most respected
negotiator in the Federation -- is
deaf? Amazing.
SCHCLAR/ARTIST
(to Picard)
First, Captain, let me say that
it is an honor to be on board such
a fine vessel.
(continuing)
Now... please continue with the
introductions.
PICARD
This is my first officer,
Commander Riker.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
It is an honor to meet you.
PICARD
Lieutenant Commander Data.
Riva looks Data up and down. Then smiles.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
It is a pleasure to meet such a
unique individual.
DATA
Thank you...
Riva responds with a nod.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 18.
30 CONTINUED:
PICARD
And our chief medical officer,
Katherine Pulaski.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
Doctor.
PICARD
This is Lieutenant La Forge.
GEORDI
Pleased to meet you, sir.
Riva touches his VISOR gently.
WOMAN
What is that you're wearing?
GEORDI
A VISOR. It modifies the
electromagnetic spectrum and
carries the readings to my brain.
WOMAN
And without it, can you see?
GEORDI
No. Without it I'm as blind as
a post.
WOMAN
Your VISOR serves the same purpose
as my Chorus, which "hears" my
thoughts and translates them into
sound.
GEORDI
Yes.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
And you don't resent it?
GEORDI
The VISOR or being blind?
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
Either.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 19.
30 CONTINUED: (2)
GEORDI
They are both part of me, and
since I like who I am, why would
I resent either being blind or
wearing the VISOR?
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
What is your position on this
ship?
GEORDI
Engineering officer, sir.
Riva feels a kinship with Geordi and it shows in his
movements. He puts a friendly hand on Geordi's
shoulder.
WOMAN
(to Geordi)
It's a blessing to understand we
are special...
(then including
everyone)
... each in his own way.
GEORDI
My feeling exactly.
WOMAN
Please call me Riva.
GEORDI
Okay. And you can call me Geordi.
PICARD
I will have you shown to you
quarters, then at your convenience
I have prepared a briefing on the
Solari wars? I offer the
hospitality of my ship during this
journey. We will provide whatever
is necessary to make you
comfortable or to facilitate your
mission.
WOMAN
Thank you.
Riva turns to Troi.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 20.
30 CONTINUED: (3)
WARRIOR/ADONIS
Perhaps, if it is not
inconvenient, Counselor Troi could
escort me.
(then to Picard)
With your permission.
Picard nods his approval.
TROI
This way.
They watch as Troi, Riva and the Warrior/Adonis exit.
RIKER
What about you?
WOMAN
At times like this -- we become
an encumbrance.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
... so if you have a room for us,
we'll wait until Riva makes
contact.
PICARD
Exactly how will he do that?
WOMAN
The headband that he wears -- it
transmits his thoughts, and
emotions to us.
PICARD
So that's how it work.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
No magic -- just technology.
PICARD
Worf, could you provide an escort.
Worf nods to an n.d. crewmember. The Woman and the
Scholar/Artist, follow the crewmember to the turbolift.
RIKER
He's not what I expected.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 21.
30 CONTINUED: (4)
PULASKI
Perhaps being "special" is in part
responsible for his success. He
has a most disarming quality.
He doesn't just ask questions
to be polite -- he actually wants
to hear the answers.
31 INT. GUEST QUARTERS (OPTICAL)
The doors open and Troi ushers Riva and the
Warrior/Adonis in. This should be very interesting -- the
Warrior/Adonis does all the talking, but the eye
contact -- the heat -- is totally and completely between
Riva and Troi. The Warrior/Adonis is there... but his
presence is not felt.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
Much of what we do is similar.
TROI
Yes -- I suppose in a way it is.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
We have both learned how to allow
people to examine feelings hidden
deep within their psyche. In
fact, being here with you is
provoking an emotional revelation.
TROI
(lightly)
You mean something I am doing is
uncovering an emotion buried in
your psyche.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
Not that deep.
TROI
Oh, exactly what are you feeling?
WARRIOR/ADONIS
Can't you tell?
TROI
Some of it -- but...
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 22.
31 CONTINUED:
WARRIOR/ADONIS
I feel that soon, perhaps after
the briefing by your captain, you
will be hungry, and perhaps we
could dine together and
compare... experiences.
Troi smiles.
TROI
I would like that.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
As will I.
They hold the look for a beat -- and the heat between
them builds.
TROI
Will you...
(meaning the translator)
... be with us?
WARRIOR/ADONIS
Until we find our own method of
communication.
TROI
I look forward to that time.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
As do I.
With a look Troi turns and exits.
32 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE (OPTICAL)
The members of the Chorus should not be like bumps --
just standing there waiting for Riva to pull their
string. They can move. The Warrior/Adonis can get
a cup of Fagomerian Tea -- the Woman can be busy with
her hands -- doing some twenty-fourth century needlepoint (she
could appear disinterested in all of this talk of war).
The Scholar/Artist can have a PADD and be working out some
equation which is important only to him. Also it is
important that the delivery NOT be too stylized or
stilted.
PICARD
Commander Data, would you please
update the situation.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 23.
32 CONTINUED:
DATA
The factions on Solais Five are
historical enemies. So many have
died that both societies are on
the verge of extinction.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
Enough. Thank you, Captain, but
there is no need to continue.
The specific issues of the
conflict have no relevance.
RIKER
So none of the background we have
prepared would be helpful in
understanding why they continue
to fight?
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
The portfolio will indicate that
the conflict is over a piece of
land, or wealth, or some other
tangible asset. But, we both know
that is not the case.
RIKER
A war which has been fought for
this long has become very
personal.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
Exactly. The basis for peace must
also be personal.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
This is an historic confrontation.
(to Data)
Correct?
DATA
The factions have been at war for
fifteen centuries.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
What's changed?
DATA
I do not know what you mean.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 24.
32 CONTINUED: (2)
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
They have been killing each other
for a long time, now they want
to talk peace. So something about
this situation has changed.
What's the new piece to the
puzzle?
PICARD
That piece of information could
be very useful. Data.
DATA
Unknown.
RIKER
Perhaps they are running out of
people to kill. In any case, for
whatever reason -- peace is now
preferred. That should make your
job easier.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
Well, if not easier, at least
possible, because they are
motivated.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
But it doesn't matter. I'll find
something. I always do.
PICARD
Always?
WARRIOR/ADONIS
To date, I have never failed.
Now, unless there is something
else...
PICARD
No. This is for your benefit.
The Woman puts away her "needlework," stands and speaks
for the first time.
WOMAN
Then... thank you for your time
and effort... if you'll excuse
me...
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 25.
32 CONTINUED: (3)
WARRIOR/ADONIS
I believe I have to get ready
for a dinner appointment.
PICARD
Then, by all means, meeting is
adjourned.
As Riva and the others leave, Riker and Picard:
RIKER
Our mediator is very...
(he pauses to pick the
correct word)
... self assured.
PICARD
Cocky is the word I would have
used.
RIKER
It's all right if he can deliver,
and we'll know that soon enough.
33 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
streaks along at warp speed.
34 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
Picard sits in his Command Chair. Riker is beside him.
Data is at Ops, Worf is at Tactical.
WESLEY
We are approaching Solais Five.
RIKER
Half impulse.
WESLEY
Slowing to one-half impulse.
35 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
comes out of warp.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 26.
35A INT. GUEST QUARTERS
Riva and Troi are sharing a meal. The Warrior/Adonis
is off to one side out of Troi's line of vision.
TROI
We have arrived.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
Then we don't have much time.
Troi agrees.
TROI
No.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
This has been very pleasant.
TROI
For me as well. I'm impressed,
by how you deal with what some
would consider a handicap.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
It's not a handicap at all.
Unless you mean having me here.
Troi glances from the Warrior/Adonis to Riva.
TROI
I did not mean that specifically,
but, yes, I would consider you
a disadvantage.
With that the Warrior/Adonis gets to his feet and
exits. Troi and Riva are now alone. For a beat they
are quiet.
TROI
(continuing)
How do we communicate? I can feel
your emotions, but don't we need
words?
He signs something.
TROI
(continuing)
I don't understand.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 27.
35A CONTINUED:
He signs gracefully with his whole being, hands, eyes,
body. Troi follows along.
TROI
(continuing)
Is that dream?
He crosses his fists over his heart.
TROI
(continuing)
Love.
She does the same, self-conscious with the intimate
gesture.
RIVA
(signing)
Stronger. Like you mean it.
Repeats the motion, eyes never leaving hers. She
echoes him, meeting his gaze.
RIVA
(continuing; signing)
Butterfly.
Troi makes the same gesture.
TROI
Is that a butterfly -- or is that
desire?
Together their hands fly in the air. They laugh like
kids. Riva's hands float, alight on hers.
36 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL)
On the viewscreen is the brown planet of Solais Five.
RIKER
Standard orbit.
WORF
Captain!
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 28.
37 ANGLE ON WORF
WORF
I'm reading laser activity in the
Solari Solar System!
Riker jumps to his feet. Picard leans forward,
intense.
RIKER
How concentrated is the activity?
WORF
It is localized -- and very
intense.
RIKER
So much for the cease-fire.
PICARD
Open hailing frequencies.
WORF
I can establish voice only.
PICARD
This is Captain Jean-Luc Picard,
commander of the Federation
starship USS Enterprise.
A CRACKLING VOICE is HEARD, but is unintelligible.
PICARD
(continuing)
If you continue to violate the
rules by breaking the cease-fire,
I will abort this mission.
A pause, then:
FIRST LEADER'S COM VOICE
You have no jurisdiction here,
Picard. Where is Riva?
PICARD
Riva is in charge of the summit.
I command the ship that brings
him. I will not endanger my ship
under any circumstances.
SECOND LEADER'S COM VOICE
Riva gave his word we would speak
to no one else. Now who breaks
the rules? Where is Riva?
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 29.
37 CONTINUED:
PICARD
(formal)
I shall summon him for you.
Picard turns to Data.
PICARD
(continuing)
Get Riva now!
37A INT. GUEST QUARTERS
Riva and Troi are still enjoying each other's company.
RIKER'S COM VOICE
Counselor Troi. Have Riva report
to the bridge immediately.
TROI
They need you on the bridge.
Now!
38 INT. MAIN BRIDGE (OPTICAL)
as Riva, his Chorus and Troi enter. Riva's confidence
now carries a touch of arrogance.
PICARD
The cease-fire has been broken.
Riva takes charge of the situation.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
I'm sure I can resolve that. Put
them on the viewscreen.
He stands in front of the Main Viewer.
PICARD
On viewscreen.
Distorted IMAGES of FIRST LEADER and SECOND LEADER appear
on the viewscreen.
WORF
The quality of the transmission
is very poor.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
It is sufficient.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 30.
38 CONTINUED:
He turns his attention to the viewscreen. The
spotlight is on him, he clearly relishes his position
and power.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
(stands right behind
Riva)
Brothers! Your bravery as
fighters is known, now you must
demonstrate your courage in a new
way -- cease hostilities -- allow
us to meet.
There is a pause as everyone watches the staticky
viewscreen, then:
WORF
The laser fire has ceased.
RIKER
But for how long -- these Solari
don't seem likely candidates for
peace.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
(to Picard)
I will need to see a topographical
overlay of the battle area in
order to pick a site for the
meetings. Then I will need your
help in creating the proper
setting.
PICARD
We are here to provide whatever
service is necessary.
39 PICARD, RIVA AND DATA - LATER
They are back at Science One looking at a display of
the planet surface.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
There -- beam us down to that
hilltop and inform the factions
to join us. The time for killing
has come to an end.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT TWO 31.
39 CONTINUED:
Riva and his Chorus leave the bridge.
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT TWO
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT THREE 32.
ACT THREE
FADE IN:
40 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
in orbit around Solais Five.
41 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL)
Riva is there with his Chorus -- Worf and Riker, both of
whom are carrying phasers.
RIKER
Set phasers on stun.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
You won't need those.
RIKER
I'm sure we won't.
Worf and Riker check their weapons, then:
RIKER
(continuing)
Energize.
They BEAM OUT.
42 EXT. SOLARI PLANET - DUSK (OPTICAL)
Riker, Worf, Riva, and his Chorus MATERIALIZE onto a
flattened mountain top... which is the middle of the
war zone. The area is battle scarred; devoid of any
life or vegetation. Riva looks around the area.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
Yes. This will do.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
It is important that we set this
up properly.
Riva moves to the middle of the flattened area.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
Commander. If it be possible -- I
would like torches -- there -- there - there
-- and there.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT THREE 33.
42 CONTINUED:
RIKER
(touches his
communicator)
Engineering, this is the away
team.
42A INT. MAIN ENGINEERING
Geordi has been waiting for this call.
GEORDI
Yes, Commander.
RIKER'S COM VOICE
We are going to need your help.
GEORDI
Yes, I thought you might.
42B EXT. PLANET
As before.
RIKER
We are going to need torches --
head high.
(to Riva)
... and what else?
WARRIOR/ADONIS
I would like a table and
chairs --
(he points)
... right here.
RIKER
Describe it.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
Round, about three meters in
diameter, and if possible made
out of indigenous rock.
RIKER
Did you copy that, Geordi?
43 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING
As before.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT THREE 34.
43 CONTINUED:
GEORDI
I did. There should be no problem
replicating a table like that.
I have the coordinates -- I'll
send down the torches, and get
right on the table.
44 EXT. MOUNTAIN TOP (OPTICAL)
Riva is very relaxed. His confidence is high. He
continues his survey of the area.
RIKER
How long before the emissaries
arrive?
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
It shouldn't be too long.
Off to the side, four torches MATERIALIZE. The
Warrior/Adonis and Worf move to set them up.
44A ANGLE WORF
as he plants one of the torches in the ground and looks
out over the battle-scarred land. He scans the
horizon. Riker comes up behind him.
WORF
They are coming.
44B SCENE
The Warrior/Adonis and Worf light up the torches. Riva
has moved to the center of the flattened area.
RIKER
How long will it take for these
negotiations?
Riva has to chuckle.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
From that question, you must think
they will go quickly.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT THREE 35.
44B CONTINUED:
RIKER
Actually, until this moment I
never thought much about it at
all.
Before Riva can answer.
WORF
Commander.
Riker turns. Worf indicates the imminent arrival of
one GROUP of SOLDIERS.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
(to Worf and Riker)
The first few minutes will be very
tense. Please...
(the Scholar/Artist
turns and gives Riva
a puzzled look, almost
like they have a bad
phone connection, then
turns back and
continues)
... ah... stay calm, and do not
respond even if you are provoked.
RIKER
(with a glance at Worf,
who can be provoked
by an ambiguous
greeting)
We will do our best.
45 SCENE
The first group of soldiers appear. They are fearsome
looking. They come up the rise and pause. One -- the
leader -- holds his position while the other two ease
off to either side.
FIRST LEADER
Who is Riva?
Riva moves forward. He is the picture of confidence,
calm, assurance.
WOMAN
I am Riva.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT THREE 36.
45 CONTINUED:
Before the introduction can be completed, the other
COMBATANTS appear. They enter even more cautiously
than the first. They have already spread out. Their
weapons are down but at-the-ready. The second leader
edges forward.
46 WORF
Has his hand on his phaser -- ready to take control of
the situation.
47 RIVA
He looks at each leader and nods a welcome.
48 LEADER ONE
He gives Riva a sideways look. His eyes never leave
the other warrior.
49 LEADER TWO
For him it is the same.
50 SCENE
Riker and Worf are on their guard. This is a very
tense situation. The opposing groups eye each other
like the natural enemies they are. Each expects the
other to break the truce.
WOMAN
Be at ease. I commend you both.
To come here shows not only
courage, but wisdom. Please -- give
this conference a chance.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
(to the leaders)
I have no magic. You have been
fighting all your lives. You know
only...
Suddenly the Scholar/Artist stops. His face turns to a
mask of confusion. He turns to look at Riva.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT THREE 37.
51 RIVA
He is stunned. Something is wrong -- something is very
wrong!
52 SCENE
The soldiers, feeling the sudden increase in tension --
react instinctively.
RIKER
Riva -- what is it?
FIRST LEADER
This is a trap.
The soldiers dash to positions of cover. Worf draws
his phaser and prepares to defend them.
RIKER
(without hesitation)
Enterprise -- beam us up. Now!
53 ANOTHER ANGLE (OPTICAL)
As the away team -- Riva and his Chorus are BEAMED back
onto the Enterprise.
54 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
in orbit around the planet.
PICARD (V.O.)
Captain's log.
55 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE
Picard, and his staff are there with Riva. Picard has
in his hands the "device" which Riva has been wearing.
PICARD
So... communication between Riva
and his Chorus was aided by this
device. Without it...
TROI
Without it, he is mute.
Picard turns it over in his hands.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT THREE 38.
55 CONTINUED:
PICARD
(to Riva)
Can you fix it?
He shakes his head, "no."
PICARD
(continuing)
Can it be fixed?
Riva motions frantically, "I don't know." The
possibility frightens the hell out of him.
56 ANGLE ON TROI
She crosses to them, speaks softly to the captain.
TROI
We must calm him.
PICARD
Lieutenant La Forge. See what
you can learn about this. If it's
possible to repair it, I need to
know.
Geordi takes the "device."
GEORDI
Right away.
Picard follows Geordi out the door.
56A INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM
Picard is there with the Chorus. They have lost their
sense of purpose.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
This is astounding. Nothing like
this has ever happened.
PICARD
I need your help.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
But what can we do? It's Riva...
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT THREE 39.
56A CONTINUED:
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
We don't know anything. We just
say what he tells us.
PICARD
We need to communicate with him.
They have no answers.
PICARD
(continuing)
Surely you know sign language.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
No.
WARRIOR/ADONIS
We've never needed it.
PICARD
And he neither reads nor writes.
WOMAN
He's never had to.
SCHOLAR/ARTIST
Riva knows sign language. He
learned it on a mission to the
Plaeties system. The parties
there were so paranoid they would
not allow us to accompany him.
WOMAN
Captain -- what's going to happen?
I feel so strange. I've never
been without him before... never.
I feel like I'm losing my mind.
PICARD
You'll be all right. Stay here.
I'll send someone to look after
you. Please... try to stay calm.
Picard exits. For a beat we HOLD on these poor lost
souls.
57 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE
As before.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT THREE 40.
57 CONTINUED:
PULASKI
Deafness for all intents and
purposes has been eliminated
except for a few isolated
situations like this. If I can
help you medically -- will you
allow it?
Riva stares at her for a moment. Picard enters. This
is not an easy decision. Then, probably with his
duties on his mind, he nods "yes."
PICARD
Riva knows sign language.
Riva nods.
DATA
Captain. There are just in the
Federation, eighty-one different
variations of signing.
PICARD
(to Data)
Find a way to communicate with
him.
(to Worf)
Take him to Sickbay. Doctor do
what you can.
The Klingon helps Riva to his feet. Picard sees the
panic in his face, tries to reassure him.
PICARD
(continuing)
You are not alone. We will solve
this together.
He seems small and fragile as Worf leads him away.
PICARD
(continuing)
If Riva does not mediate this
summit successfully, the Solari
will destroy each other.
RIKER
But if he can't speak, and can't
use his Chorus, he's useless.
Captain, you should mediate.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT THREE 41.
57 CONTINUED: (2)
PICARD
It is not me they want. They
believe in Riva. The problem
is, he no longer believes in
himself.
Picard gets up, crosses to the door.
PICARD
(continuing)
Keep me posted of Riva's progress.
I'll be in my quarters.
RIKER
Yes sir.
PICARD
We have to find a way to talk
to him.
Picard exits. Off Riker's reaction:
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT THREE
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FOUR 42.
ACT FOUR
FADE IN:
58 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
in orbit around Solais Five.
PICARD (V.O.)
Captain's log, Stardate 42111.8.
We are monitoring increased
military activity on Solais Five.
I fear that we will be unable to
keep the Solari from destroying
themselves without Riva and still
he is silent.
59 INT. MAIN BRIDGE - AT SCIENCE ONE (OPTICAL)
Data is at a computer terminal running programs which
depict various forms of signing. Riker comes up behind
him.
RIKER
How's it going?
DATA
I have eliminated all but five
distinct forms of signing. I will
learn them all.
60 ANGLE ON DATA (OPTICAL)
Eyes on the computer.
DATA
Computer. Show me gestural
language -- designation M-nine.
As information appears on the screen, Data signs, hands
moving slowly. His hands move slowly as he get the
hang of it. Worf steps over to watch.
WORF
Interesting. A technique of
communication which is both silent
and covert. It could be very
useful.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FOUR 43.
60 CONTINUED:
Data reads the computer screen and carries on a
conversation at the same time.
DATA
As a language -- the use of
gestures and hand signals
pre-dates the spoken word in most
cultures. The major exception
being the Leyrons of Malkus Nine
who actually developed a written
language first.
Worf grunts. While, Data focuses on the computer,
phenomenal memory absorbing it all.
DATA
(continuing)
Computer - continue presentation.
The display on the CRT changes.
DATA
(continuing)
Increase.
The information speeds up. So do Data's hands.
DATA
(continuing)
Increase.
Everything moves faster.
DATA
(continuing)
Increase.
And faster.
DATA
(continuing)
Increase.
The screen's a blur. Data's hands are flying. Off
Worf's reaction:
61 INT. SICKBAY
Troi watches Pulaski put Riva through a series of
tests.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FOUR 44.
61 CONTINUED:
TROI
He's very frightened. All his
life he's been in control. For
once, he doesn't have the answers.
As Pulaski shakes her head.
PULASKI
Since Riva has never had hearing,
his brain cannot accept auditory
information.
TROI
Which means?
PULASKI
There is no immediate medical
solution available.
Riva watches Pulaski, despair on his face.
TROI
(to Riva)
Let's see how Geordi is coming.
62 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING - ANGLE ON GEORDI
carefully trying to disassemble the device as Troi and
Riva enter.
GEORDI
I've never seen anything like this
before. It transmits Beta waves,
but I can't figure exactly how.
I wish I had thought to run a test
while it was still functioning.
TROI
(to Riva)
Can you help?
Riva makes a powerless gesture: "How?"
GEORDI
If he could tell me anything,
anything at all.
Riva shakes his head, it won't work. Buries his face
in his hands. The anguish of not being understood.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FOUR 45.
62 CONTINUED:
GEORDI
(continuing)
Well, I'll continue to work on
it.
Then responding to Riva's anguish.
GEORDI
(continuing)
I know what you must be going
through. I can imagine what it
would be like to lose my VISOR.
But... we'll find something.
Don't give up.
Troi cocks her head, reading Riva, it makes her sad.
TROI
Too late. I think he already has.
No interpretation necessary for the sign Riva makes.
He has given up.
63 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM
The CHIME SOUNDS.
PICARD
Come.
Troi enters.
PICARD
How is our mediator?
TROI
The same. Unreachable.
Picard's face is etched with concern.
PICARD
What can we do to help him?
TROI
I can't do anything. It's up to
him. Confidence is faith in
oneself, it can't be given by
another.
Picard takes a long moment to absorb this, then nods.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FOUR 46.
63 CONTINUED:
PICARD
You're right, of course.
Troi leans across the table, puts her hand over his.
The CHIME SOUNDS again.
PICARD
(continuing)
Come.
Data enters.
DATA
Captain, I have reviewed and
stored five distinct signing
languages.
64 ANGLE ON DATA
He turns to demonstrate his new ability.
DATA
This is blue. This is a blue
ocean. This is a blue ocean at
sunset. This is two people
walking along the beach by a blue
ocean at sunset. This is two
happy people in love walking along
the beach by a blue ocean at
sunset. This is --
He'd go on forever if someone didn't say --
PICARD
Enough!
(beat)
Let's talk to Riva.
65 INT. OBSERVATION LOUNGE
Picard, Data, Troi, and Riva.
PICARD
Good news. Data has learned your
language. He can translate for
you at the summit.
Data repeats Riva's signed reply.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FOUR 47.
65 CONTINUED:
DATA
(translating)
It will not work. I need my
words.
Riva responds sharply.
DATA
(continuing;
translating)
There -- that is what I mean. Your
translation is literal. You say
words. I do not need just words -- I
need nuance, and subtlety...
the shadings my Chorus enable me
to communicate.
PICARD
But your ability is unchanged.
All that's different is the method
of transmission.
Riva's body language says it all.
DATA
(translating)
No! I cannot!
Troi situates herself behind Picard.
TROI
(softly)
It's not working. Go another
direction.
Picard's expression changes. Body language becomes
forceful, angry.
PICARD
Data can understand you. Use him
as your Chorus. Let him express
your words.
DATA
(translating)
No -- it is not the same thing.
Data is unacceptable...
PICARD
You've got to take advantage of
what you've got...
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FOUR 48.
65 CONTINUED: (2)
Riva looks at him for a moment.
DATA
(translating)
What I have got. I have got
nothing. Do you not understand - I
cannot do it.
PICARD
You're right. Maybe you are all
show.
Riva's eyes flash in anger.
PICARD
(continuing)
You hide behind your Chorus.
(in his face)
You're a fake.
66 CLOSER ON PICARD AND RIVA
Riva takes a threatening step towards Picard. Catches
himself, signs with a smirk.
DATA
(translating)
You are attempting to provoke me.
Picard nods, hopeful.
DATA
(continuing;
translating)
It is not going to work.
67 ANGLE ON PICARD
Disappointed.
PICARD
That's too bad. A lot of people
are going to die.
68 ANGLE ON RIVA
in complete turmoil. Bolts from the room.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FOUR 49.
69 PICARD
He pauses for a moment. Then gets up:
PICARD
Data.
The android rises, then he and Picard exit in pursuit
of Riva.
70 INT. GUEST QUARTERS
Picard finds Riva. He gently touches Riva's shoulder.
Riva turns -- he tries weakly to smile.
PICARD
We will return you to Ramatis.
Riva nods -- resigned -- very disappointed.
PICARD
(continuing)
... but, first I am going to
attempt to settle the conflict
on Solais.
Riva signs -- Data interprets:
DATA
(translating)
You.
PICARD
We have come this far -- it would
be difficult for me personally
to leave without making the
attempt.
DATA
(translating)
It could be dangerous.
Picard nods.
PICARD
Help me.
Throughout this exchange, Riva's mood will begin to
lighten. As he communicates with Picard, the very act
of self-expression slowly restores his self-esteem.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FOUR 50.
70 CONTINUED:
DATA
(translating)
How?
Picard is driving this in a specific direction.
PICARD
We all earn our reputations.
Yours is that of a very successful
negotiator -- a mediator.
DATA
(translating)
And you want to know the trick.
PICARD
If there is one - yes.
DATA
(translating)
Captain, there is no secret. What
I do is help one person -- one
group -- express themselves to the
other.
PICARD
Simple enough to say - difficult
to accomplish.
DATA
(translating)
The real trick is getting them
to listen. To understand. To
turn a disadvantage to an
advantage.
PICARD
Then why can't you turn your
disadvantage into an advantage?
Riva studies Picard for a long moment. Then a smile
comes to his face.
DATA
(translating)
That is an interesting thought...
(to Picard)
I do not understand -- what thought
is he referring to?
Riva stands. He reaches out and shakes Picard's hand.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FOUR 51.
70 CONTINUED: (2)
DATA
(continuing,
translating)
Thank you.
PICARD
I will contact those down on the
planet. Tell them to prepare to
begin discussions immediately.
Off Data's reaction:
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT FOUR
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FIVE 52.
ACT FIVE
FADE IN:
71 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
in orbit around Solais Five.
72 INT. TRANSPORTER ROOM (OPTICAL)
Riva is there with Picard and Data, both of whom are
carrying phasers.
PICARD
Set phasers on stun.
Data and Picard check their weapons, then:
PICARD
(continuing)
Energize.
They BEAM OUT.
73 EXT. SOLARI PLANET (OPTICAL)
Picard, Riva, and Data MATERIALIZE onto the flattened
mountain top... Riva will sign and Data will
interpret. Data does not have to sign because Riva,
after all, can read lips.
Riva looks around the area, then signs to Data.
DATA
(speaking for Riva)
Could you relight the torches,
to let them know that I am back.
73A PICARD
He moves to the nearest torch and relights it. Then
gazes for a moment out over the battlefield.
73B SCENE
Data has lighted another of the torches and is walking
toward the third. Riva moves to the middle of the
flattened area.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FIVE 53.
73B CONTINUED:
DATA
(continuing to speak
for Riva)
I would like the table right here.
PICARD
(to Data)
Make it so.
DATA
(touching his
communicator)
Main Engineering, this is
Commander Data.
74 INT. MAIN ENGINEERING - ANGLE ON GEORDI
GEORDI
Go ahead, Data.
DATA'S COM VOICE
You can beam the table down now.
75 EXT. MOUNTAIN TOP (OPTICAL)
Riva is very relaxed. His confidence is back.
PICARD
It could be a while before the
emissaries arrive. They will be
more cautious after the last
incident.
DATA
(speaking for Riva)
You can leave whenever you choose.
I will get a message out when I
am ready to leave.
(to Picard as Data)
Captain -- I do not understand what
is going on here? Without his
interpreters, how can he mediate?
The table MATERIALIZES while they talk.
PICARD
Riva is going to teach them sign
language.
Riva steps forward.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FIVE 54.
75 CONTINUED:
DATA
(speaking for Riva)
Yes -- it is turning a disadvantage
into an advantage. Learning how
to sign will actually become part
of the process of them learning
how to live together in peace.
PICARD
As they learn how to communicate
with Riva, they will be learning
to communicate with each other.
DATA
(speaking for Riva)
... and that is the first and most
important step in any
relationship.
(to Picard as Data)
Captain, although it took me only
moments to learn sign language,
it will take them months.
PICARD
Time well spent.
DATA
(speaking for Riva)
These people have been fighting
all their lives, they know only
hatred, suspicion, fear. Even
with my Chorus -- I could not have
changed those attitudes in a day.
We have a chance, and they want
the talks to be successful or they
would not have called me.
Riva steps over to the table and sits down.
75A PICARD AND DATA (OPTICAL)
They move off to the side.
PICARD
Enterprise -- two to beam up.
(to Riva)
Good luck.
DATA
(translating for Riva)
And to you.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FIVE 55.
75A CONTINUED:
Picard and Data DISAPPEAR in the TRANSPORTER BEAM.
Leaving Riva all alone on the empty mountain top - waiting.
76 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
in orbit around Solais Five.
PICARD (V.O.)
Captain's log, Stardate 42111.8.
Personal comment. I am confident
that Riva can help the Solari
achieve a lasting peace. We will
deliver his Chorus to Starbase
Seven-One-Three so they can be
returned to Ramatis.
77 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
Riker has the Command Chair -- Picard is not on the
bridge.
RIKER
Take us out of orbit.
78 OMITTED
78A EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
leaving orbit.
79 INT. CAPTAIN'S READY ROOM
The CHIME SOUNDS.
PICARD
Come.
Geordi enters.
GEORDI
Sir?
PICARD
Yes, Mister La Forge, something on
your mind?
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FIVE 56.
79 CONTINUED:
Being Geordi, he gets right to the point.
GEORDI
Sir, I know my VISOR gives me a
unique way of seeing that's
valuable to the ship, but if
something happened and I didn't
have it --
PICARD
What makes you unique isn't your
blindness or your VISOR --
(searching for the
words)
To be special we don't need to
do a damned thing. Just be what
we are.
(beat)
There's only one Geordi La Forge.
And I wouldn't want to run my ship
without him.
A big grin spreads across Geordi's face.
GEORDI
All right!
(more controlled)
I mean, thank you sir.
PICARD
Dismissed.
Picard watches with a bemused, paternal expression as
Geordi exits.
80 OMITTED
81 INT. SICKBAY
Geordi's in the examining chair.
PULASKI
Optic nerve laser welding. A
difficult operation. It might
not work. But if it did, it would
open up a whole world for you.
STAR TREK: "Loud as a Whisper" - 11/10/88 - ACT FIVE 57.
82 CLOSE ON GEORDI
He takes off his VISOR. Eyes exposed, face full of
fear and hope.
GEORDI
I'll think about it.
83 INT. MAIN BRIDGE
The bridge crew in their positions. Business as usual.
RIKER
Set course, two-two-four, mark,
three-nine.
WORF
What is our destination?
PICARD
Alpha Delta Beta. A routine
transport mission.
DATA
I thought this was supposed to
be a routine transport mission.
Out of the mouths of babes. Picard and Riker exchange
a knowing smile.
PICARD
Engage!
84 EXT. SPACE - THE ENTERPRISE (OPTICAL)
moving away to another adventure.
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT FIVE
THE END
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